I'm not going to make this review long. I will just stick to the basics.
The grammar really needed some work. I know the author is Scottish, but still, some of the sentences didn't make sense. Plus, she would repeat words over and over.
"To be honest, it was nice to be honest..."
The formatting was screwy at points, with the fonts changing mid word.
And the story itself, while interesting, was very shallow and not fleshed out too much. It seemed like some things were just skimmed over, leaving you wanting more depth and insight. I wish this read had been deeper.