The Twilight Swimmer - A.C. Kavich

I can't decide if I want to finish this. Setting aside the formatting issues and the grammatical errors, I just read a terribly unbelievable scene. The Swimmer is at least a hundred feet or more under water, locked inside a metal locker in a sunken ship, and he somehow hears Brandi's voice which is miles away, over land on the surface. Fantasy can be told in a way to be believed, but damn if that is NOT it. I have been willing to play along with the Swimmer hearing speech underwater when he is directly below a boat. But this is so far beyond the realm of possibility that I just don't know if I can go on. What do you think?